Thursday, November 13, 2008

Joel's New Story

Can't be bothered to blog properly - need to pack for our trip to Glasgow tomorrow. But J2 wrote a story today and I think it's worth sharing, so check it out HERE
I've uploaded the unedited version. I've marked it now and he need to go over it again, but I was not unduly impressed with his first attempt. His errors are ones I would expect of a 10yo and to correct everything first time would be quite advanced, as it is mainly commas and repeated words that need sorting out. Word count 665 words - so not bad on that either :) See what you think!

No comments: